Fried Rice

Jan 30, 2015 23:31
Since I became hungry, I opened the refrigerator in my laboratory.

There were only some eggs and some condiments.

Also, I cooked rice this morning and it was still left.

Then I decided to make a fried rice though there were no meat and vegetables.

I love fried rice and I often make it because it's delicious and easy to make.

After a while, a rustic fried rice was completed.

It not have much of a taste, but I like it.

Mogumogu... I have enjoyed the meal.

Also, when I make a fried rice, I remember the following song.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Bo7A85wzU0o

　 ∧,,∧
　(；`・ω・）　　｡･ﾟ･⌒） チャーハン作るよ！！
　/　　 ｏ━ヽニニフ))
　しー-Ｊ


　　　　　　　　アッ！　｡･ﾟ･
　 ∧,,∧ て　　　　　｡･ﾟ･｡･ﾟ･
　(； ´ﾟωﾟ）て　　　／／
　/　　 ｏ━ヽニニフ
　しー-Ｊ　　 　彡


　　　　∧,,∧　　　　ｼｮﾎﾞｰﾝ
　　　（ ´・ω・）
　　c(,＿Ｕ_Ｕ　　　　　　･ﾟ･｡･ ﾟ･｡･ﾟ･ ｡･ﾟ･
　　　　　━ヽニニフ


No. 1　Timmy's correction
  • Also, I cooked rice this morning and it was still left.
  • Also, I cooked rice this morning and it was still left (or: ...morning, so there was some left over.)
  • It not have much of a taste, but I like it.
  • It didn't have much of a taste, but I like it. (or: I have to admit that it didn't have much of a taste...)
Nice!
kanotown
Thank you so much always for correcting me! :D
Timmy
You are welcome!
No. 2　Jess's correction
  • Since I became hungry, I opened the refrigerator in my laboratory.
  • Since I became was hungry, I opened the refrigerator in my laboratory.
    　The word "laboratory" is usually used to describe a place where scientific experiments occur. Perhaps you mean kitchen or dormitory?
  • Also, I cooked rice this morning and it was still left.
  • Also, I cooked rice this morning and there was still some left.
    　You could also combine your previous sentence with this one to say: There were only some eggs and some condiments, as well as cooked rice left over from this morning.
  • Then I decided to make a fried rice though there were no meat and vegetables.
  • Then I decided to make a fried rice even though there were no meat and vegetables.
  • I love fried rice and I often make it because it's delicious and easy to make.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • After a while, a rustic fried rice was completed.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • It not have much of a taste, but I like it.
  • It not have much of a taste, but I like it.
    　It didn't taste like much, but I liked it.
  • I have enjoyed the meal.
  • I have enjoyed the meal.
  • Also, when I make a fried rice, I remember the following song.
  • Also, when I make a fried rice, I remember the following song.
kanotown
  • Since I became was hungry, I opened the refrigerator in my laboratory.

    The word "laboratory" is usually used to describe a place where scientific experiments occur. Perhaps you mean kitchen or dormitory?

Thank you very much for your correction! (^-^)

Actually, the refrigerator is placed in my laboratory of my university. I often take out some items from the refrigerator at my lab., and go to staff kitchen room. :)
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